The movie 2001: A Space Odyssey was a new experience for me. It was the first real science fiction movie I have ever watched, and it was hard for me to get into the plot. The movie begins with a group of primates who find a big, black "wall" that fascinates them. They begin to examine and it and then finally touch it. The film then moves to a more present-day scene where a scientist, Dr. Floyd, is preparing his astronauts for a space mission.
The astronauts do not fully understand their mission, but they willingly accept. They are sent into space as a team of 5 humans and one machine; the machine was the only one who had the full knowledge of their mission. The movie then progresses to a group of astronauts finding another one of the black "walls". To the viewer, the purpose of the "wall" still remains a mystery.
After about a year and a half on their mission, the machine named HAL starts to malfunction and the astronauts try to fix it. HAL seems to go back to normal, but soon begins to show signs of mutiny again. He knows that the astronauts are planning to disconnect him if he does not properly help them, and he kills all but one of the humans. Dave, who was the only man to survive, tries to prevent HAL from becoming too powerful, and eventually disconnects HAL. Right after disconnecting HAL, Dave finds out the real purpose of their mission.
Dave embarks on a journey to Jupiter to try and discover the purpose of the "walls" that were being found throughout evolution. On his way to Jupiter, he goes through a tunnel of time travel, and ends up arriving as an old man. After what I believe to be his death, he transforms into a fetus and becomes known as the "star child". According to Ed Williamson, the purpose of the movie is to showhow man will progress from a time of tool usage to a time when we will be interacting with "something else".
I did not like the movie very much, first of all because it was a sciene fiction movie; it did not hold my attention very well. I found the lack of commentary hard to follow, and I had a hard time understanding what was going on. Most of the time, I found myself trying to piece together the different scenes because they would switch so quickly. I would try to figure out why the "walls" were such an important part of the movie, and then it would switch to a different scene altogether.
I did have to do a little research on the film to see if I could get any background information. When I read the article by Ed Williamson, the "walls" made more sense to me. He described them as a sort of catalyst to speed up evolution. I though back to the parts where it would cut from the primates looking at the "wall" to the astronauts in space; then finally to the end when Dave is laying on his deathbed with the final "wall" in front of him and he becomes the "star child".
Once I realized that Kubrick was trying to portray evolution and the use of tools and technology, it became easier to follow what was happening in the film. I think Kubrick did a good job trying to predict things that would happen in the future, and the plot became more interesting. Once I understood more of his intentions, it was easier for me to see what the "walls" stood for. I realized that the "wall" was a symbol for evolution. I didn't like the fact that I wasn't able to see that on my own.
I don't think I enjoyed this movie very much because it was hard for me to see the "big picture" of all that was going on. The lack of commentary and quick switching of scenes made it hard for me to focus and piece together the plot. If it had not been for the movie synopsis and the article from Ed Williamson, I still don't think I would understand the main point of the movie.
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Good first draft, but right now it's mostly summary. Need to work on discussing your opinions and using examples from the film to back it up.
ReplyDeleteAlso, introduce the film better: title, director, release date, significance of the film.
You might mention the primate's discovery of tools in your plot summary. Also, the Jupiter mission happens after the group of astronauts visits the monolith on the Moon.
The astronauts don't try to fix HAL, they try to fix the satellite that HAL says is broken. When they discover it's fine, they wonder if HAL is malfunctioning and they discuss whether to shut him down. HAL reads their lips...and then kills the hibernating humans and eventually Frank Poole, too.
At one point you say you found "the lack of commentary hard to follow," which is a contradiction because if there isn't any, you can't follow it. You mean to say that the lack makes the film hard to follow.
The end of your draft lacks a strong judgment; I think it's there, but you may need to make the wording stronger and eliminate some excess words, like "I don't think I enjoyed" and instead just say "I didn't enjoy".
i thought it was a lot of summary, but i did really like that you when you did look up stuff you incorporated it into the paper. it adds more to the paper. I would just re-read it over and over and see what doesn't fit right and give some background information on the movie. good job!
ReplyDeleteI see too much summary on your essay which occupies most part of it. I think you should make it concise that will be easy for your readers to follow. Also, I think you should introduce something about the director, the release date, and the accomplishments this film achieved. I think these will help your audiences to get more general ideas about it. But I do like the opinions you showed why you do not like this film. I can see your criteria and follow your ideas easily.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a good first draft. I liked how you explained the plot of the movie and then went into detail on the parts that were not clar. I also enjoyed how you told why you did not think the plot was very clear in the film. The fact that you put in the paper the source, which was the article, that helped you understand it better, brought clarity to the reason why you now know the plot. I think it is overall a good draft but there could be a little more detail telling why you thought the point of the movie was not clear.
ReplyDeleteI think that it would be interesting if you put something in on the time period of when it came out. Whether it was more understandable or less understandable because of the technologies that were at that point foreign in the late 60's early 70's . It would be a good idea for something else to talk about in your paper. Other than that I thought that your credibility was very high because you sited a credible source. I think it would benefit from talking more about your opinion and backing it up with the film.
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